Optimus BLitZeD (excerpt)

Optimus BLitZeD (excerpt)

A Poem by BLitZeD
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~Optimus BLitZeD~
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I'm quick at the wrist.
A flick of that shit
You wake in abyss.
Another reality like Oculus Rift.
~Optimus BLitZeD~
Black Ops, buy from black shops, optimal risks.
Red dot on bad cops, interchangeable clips .
Turtle shells on roof tops, Splinter-cell capable, slips
In undetected. 50 cal. hits that face and just rips
Past skin, bone, and cartilage to the brain stem in bits.
Cartridges plus marksmanship equal carnage, be damned if he lives.
Walk up with a raptor claw and stick the blade in his ribs.
Zigzag pattern, give the pastor a call, split um down to the hips.
Zig Zags, smoking green pastures, a  blunt and a spliff.
Deceptively a cybernetic artist of the con, rearranges and shifts.
Fall of Cybertron, with Nike's on, im a hyper ROM with no grip.
I'm ill. No face. Can't feel it.  I'm sick.
Your witnessing the transcendence of 
~Optimus BLitZeD~
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© 2016 BLitZeD


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the fusion of so many vivid concepts to create a well fabricated construct is incredible.. fierce articulation, wonderful

Posted 2 Years Ago


Another epic piece Maestro, a round of applause and several Jammy Dodgers for you, love your work it's a joy to read, sorry I'm so behind, slowly chugging my way through! XxXx

Posted 3 Years Ago


Your in Beast Mode here Blitzed, 'ROM'- read only memory.. That's the way to
Finished it off my Friend. Outstanding Job, very cool Thanks EG

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

haha, i'm glad you caught that, thanks man
Very nice poem!
I really liked it!
Keep on writing!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Check you out. I love the flow amazing write

Posted 3 Years Ago


m and m,snoop dog too! they aint got s**t on you
you write about drama,you write about weed
now here you go,you planted a seed

Posted 3 Years Ago


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The second piece in a row I've reviewed that contained weed references. Making me hungry. BLitZ3D, I don't know what to say about this other than your writing just seems to get better, more accomplished and polished with every new effort. When I go to my requests queue and see one of yours there I head straight for it right NOW. Another kick-a*s BLitZ3D piece, sigh. take care...dan

Posted 3 Years Ago


dan

3 Years Ago

just RR me, OK? dan
BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

i will when its posted
BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

sent you a few

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BLitZeD

New Jersey Devil, FL



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