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A Poem by BLitZeD

If this was Marvel, I'd be Deadpool
I'm quick at the mouth, I f*****g shred fools.
Your' soft like a teddy bear, I'm the bear from Ted 2.
I take a blunt to face and a bottle to bed too.
You take the lead like a model and swallow 
gag reflex quick like Kung Fu.
Sick to your stomach, the hollows and you have a lot in common.
They seem to be bulimic too and your both screaming, 
I'm leaving let me know when you got something new


© 2016 BLitZeD

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BLitZeD, This piece is more of what I've come to expect from your writing. The name-dropping of pop culture references built a strong foundation on which to erect a platform. I wish it was longer. There seems to be a lot more depth you might have excavated.
Nice piece. take care...dan

Posted 6 Years Ago


6 Years Ago

thanks man and yea maybe i shoulda went longer, just drew this up real quick on break tho

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Added on April 23, 2016
Last Updated on April 23, 2016



New Jersey Devil, FL

i give them the plans i drew up with thoughts methodically calculated and so intricately placed , every outcome was accounted for and algebraically related. f*****g statistically graced, like .. more..

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