Blow Out Time

Blow Out Time

A Poem by BLitZeD
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HitMan973 McClure https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7o1Tmn0PccU https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCNSSAtrngR0qDifX96vKa_Q

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BLOW OUT TIME
(BLitZ3D Verse)

Encrypted gods, Egyptian blogs. 
Shine like sun, fire against all odds.
Ra ripped it once,
I ripped a blunt
YouTube playing,
said yup,
Imma f**k this up..

When they said holy ghost , they meant a ghost writer
Scriptures in lemon juice, held to a lighter
Prescriptions im menacing, Addicting, im higher.
Corrosively sentencing, Acidicly fire.
Double tap ,Two shots, Pull an nighter.
Blitzed is the fuse, Ra's the igniter.

Chem mix, Dirty bomb. Shrapnel's flying by ya
Semtex, murder squad, Smoke signal we ain't hiding.
Rhyming in the rough, not rough with the rhyming.
Consistently buying, flip a dime into a diamond.
till my demise, i'ma trap, till I die man.
Hustler on the side, 
Just reserving my spot, fam
This lands not lost ,
Its the land of the lost men.
Raps not gone, 
Just right now departed.
Lyrics end to start, gada rip the words apart.
Put them back together, in a twisted abstract art .
Sign them to the page in a a bloody beast mark.
Binding what I say, its a writers theme park.
Lions out his cage, blinding light in the dark. 
Pride on the stage, flow ill from the start  

BLitZ3D and Dirty just destroyed the f*****g mic 

I aint even rap, 
I just wrote in his hype
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*'Pen Drop*
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-_-BLitZ3D-_-
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Wreckx
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Myc
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© 2017 BLitZeD


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Love what this turned into, I hope you love it too :D Fantastic as always I love to see the final pieces of your work x

Posted 2 Years Ago


The choice of words are quite bizarre, like when you're talking about the Holy Ghost (bless you man) then the next line talks about lemons...hahaha, yet when they are put together, they create a blend of tenacity and artistry. Good job for this piece of RAP!

Posted 2 Years Ago


BLitZeD

2 Years Ago

lemon juice is invisible ink.. ghost writer. ;) lol
Dang good stuff..really
Like the flow , you have my head thinking
My body moving.. I can feel it.
Poetry with a beat = rap
Thank you for sharing Holly

Posted 2 Years Ago


"Lyrics end to start, gada rip the words apart.
Put them back together, in a twisted abstract art ."

Best words EVER. I loved this. Rap is not my favorite mode of lyricism or musical inclination, but READING it is! (Namely because I can understand all the words!)

I really enjoyed reading this. However, those two lines - those. Right on the mark for everything else as a whole. They were the summation, the conclusion, the introduction and the purpose.

So very well done. Kudos.

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is good, i like how it goes with the music you picked. Great consistency.


Posted 2 Years Ago


BLitZeD

2 Years Ago

: )
Not really my kind of poetry, but it is fairly good. Some of your word usage is beautifully materialized in a strange way.

Pretty good. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


BLitZeD

2 Years Ago

thank you .
it's different and I like it

Posted 2 Years Ago


BLitZeD

2 Years Ago

; )
Well, that was certainly entertaining to read! I always enjoy seeing rappers on this site; they tend to be very good at keeping me entertained with their writing. I'm not the best with critiquing raps lyrics, but I can definitely say that you're flow is solid on this. Without even listening to the actual song I could picture a beat to this. On top of that, you kept it all seasoned and energized with a wonder blend of rhymes, literary devices and a bit of humor. You have talent, that's for sure.

Although I have just one thing to ask; when you wrote "Double tap ,Two shots, Pull an niter." Did you mean to say ALL niter, or is it meant to be niter? This isn't a criticism. I'm just curious. This is fantastic material. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


BLitZeD

2 Years Ago

thanks man, nah i ment all nighter, spell check
DoormanDan

2 Years Ago

Ah. Good luck with your music. It's pretty good.
BLitZeD

2 Years Ago

thanks man, you want entedrtaining? check this s**t out

http://www.writerscafe.org/w.. read more
sounded like a top ten hip hop to me

Posted 2 Years Ago


BLitZeD

2 Years Ago

agreed, make sure you check out Ra's youtube page bro
 wordman

2 Years Ago

i will check it out tonight
this is awesome! was listening to Jimi Hendrix's Little wing and it came out in perfect tune :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


BLitZeD

2 Years Ago

haha nice, nice.. glad you liked it ;)

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