Desire Breeding Loss of Identity

Looking at you
I forget who I am,
forget who I want to be
because I'm so caught up
in trying to be
a person you'll find attractive.

Reviews

[Laura Maidah]

It sounds like a song. Try expanding it into lyrics. It's a great concept. P.S. Care what people think. Everyone does. Everyone lies. Care. But not enough to change. I don't know if you can relate to this speaker, so maybe it's purely fictional.