Who Will Miss Me?

Who Will Miss Me?

A Poem by BloodyMary
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Poem i randomly made up.

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Who will miss me,
If I fall?
On top of this bridge,
Which stands so tall.
Who will miss me,
If I hang?
Dangling from this rope,
Brings a Bitter-Sweet tang.
Who will miss me,
If I cut too deep?
My blood pools around me,
As I fall forever asleep.
Who will miss me,
If I die?
I'll end this suffering,
And in heaven, I'll fly.
But,
Who will miss me?
I didn't do this for fun.
After, will I smile, or ask,
"What have I done?"

© 2011 BloodyMary


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BloodyMary
Not my best work, but still, tell me if you liked!

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great question you have in here, it has been always my concern, the way you ended the poem holds the answer to it. great piece ... well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I liked this. I ask myself this question quite often.

Posted 12 Years Ago


oh my gosh!!! I love it!! this is totally going into my favorites!!!! absolutely astounding!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Really good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like the emotion in this, I find emotion to be very important in poetry, and you did a wonderful job with it here. I'm sure many many people would miss you, I barely know you and I would miss you. I do have to put in my constructive criticism though, from writer to writer and I hope you can appreciate that. The rhythm and flow of this one could be improved, it isn't bad, but it could be better.

Posted 12 Years Ago


such fine fist

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the emotion! I love that you're writing about this and not actually going through with it... but ya know, if you ever need a stranger to talk to, I'm here(: great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love your emotion in this poem. It shows your in pain and want to express it. I know myself what that feels like to want to die and wonder if anyone will miss you so i find this amazing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love all emotion in this! I love your choice of words. Keep writing! I cant wait to read more

Posted 12 Years Ago



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