Hangs

Hangs

A Poem by BloodyMary
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Just a random haiku i came up with.

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The wind whistles by,
Throughout the dark forest trees,
Where the woman hangs.

© 2011 BloodyMary


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Kind of morbid, but darkly interesting. Hmm...I liked it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


a really macabre image. this is the first i've seen as a haiku...they;re usually all happy and sunshine. i like this because it's dark, and you captured a scene i could picture in my mind's eye. great piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A bit sombre,but you remember it.Good work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow, loved it! Totally didn't see it coming, even given the title. A winner in any/every haiku contest, for sure!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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So very nicely done! I enjoyed this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I do not really know how haiku works but I really like this image, not the woman hanging but the whole theme, quit dark and intense. well done

Posted 10 Years Ago



Wow, that was tense, great 3rd line. Real spoiler!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is wonderful, enjoyable read!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice... and it makes the point come across

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this. It;s short, and simple, but really cool at the same time. This is the kind of poem that would be really cool on like the back of a book or at the beginning of a chapter or something like that, grabbing the redder in and making them curious for more. You should write a story to complement it. Great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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