STOP.

STOP.

A Poem by master squiggles
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sorry about this poem, but i had to let it out. WARNING: STRONG LANGUAGE.

"
STOP CHANGING
they say... it won't last
well, maybe it won't
but you are not the one
he thinks you are
i will not sit here any longer
and stare as you
fulfill your wishes

YOU DO NOT F*****G LOVE HIM
or at least he does not love you
all of my words written
no, scribbled
on this paper
scream out the truth
you are NOT IN LOVE THIS YOUNG

i'm sick of your S**T
and i'm sick of your FITS
of rage, FITS of grief
after a little over a month
why are you so hard to hold on to?

well, i know now
who you really are
you can just LEAVE ME HERE
if you want to --
oh, wait
you already did

i'm tired of his g a m e s
i'm tired of the w a y 
you look him in the e y e s 
f**k all four of your l i e s
no, they're not even y o u r s 
truth is, they n e v e r  w e r e
so i'm leaving you alone
you want to fix this?  no, you 
W O N ' T 

because i know you well enough
tomorrow
i'll 
      be
            gone

© 2012 master squiggles


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Author's Note

master squiggles
written for one of my "friends" who has been kinda pissing me off lately with her romance-related bullshit. alright, choose him over me, then.

so, yes. sorry about this poem.

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Oh, I know how that is. Guys make girls crazy. They forget everyone else.

The font is really pretty, by the by.

But, aherm, anyway. Yeah. That sucks. And then when he's gone or whatever, they come runnin' back to you, sobbing about it all and yada yada yada. I kind of did that before. Not exactly. But kind of, minus the sobbing. 8D. I guess when you're this young, you think that love'll last forever, but the truth is when you're this young it's mostly just motherfucking hormones. Of course, I knew better, because I'm so spectacularly smart (no, really, I am a genius 8D), but yah.

Sorry to hear it.

Don't be sorry about the poem! Let it all out! Scream and shout! Have no doubts!

Yash, no more rhyming.

'Bye now.

Love you.

No homo.

Ciao.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I think this would be cool as a preformance, sort of DADA project. Have you thought about just randomly distributing these places and seeing if it shakes things up?

Posted 6 Years Ago


A new penny
found a new Penny,
Wishing for a month,
a name ,
June ,April, May
A hot rainy windy girl name
Penny too.....

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love this and use of fonts. Glorious.

Posted 7 Years Ago


There's a lot of aggression and force and hurt here, and you put it across very well - the fonts help!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Oh the joys of friendship. I understand totally

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love the rant and you keep it pumping out. I love the formatting as it drew me in. I love the raw honesty so the free write is perfect. Keep going.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I think this is awesome ... Who cares about the language ? Its your feelings let it out ... I love it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I can't tell you how satisfying your intensity is. I had to unclench my knuckles after reading this. Many readers can relate to this on a personal level, which is what makes this so effective. It's the raw emotion of it all. Unfiltered vinegar.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow, love what you did with the fonts. It really made a difference when I read it. It felt like you just poured the words from your heart, and they are angry and hurt. I'm sorry for what you are going through, because this poem showed me how you feel, I can kind of understand.

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's aesthetically lovely. Well thought out. Wonderful poem. Very in your face tone. Pacing? No issues. Meter varies. No rhyme. Overall, great read.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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