stream of time

New days of unique theme

idling towards paths of unfamiliarity.

Quickly these days pass

finding their ordinary niche.

Experiences mending to memories

limiting these routes of change.

Naturally, days are chosen

shortly confining these paths

               so when do I choose my stream of time? 

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

you have a mysteriously inquisitve mind, superb....

[Leslie Philibert]

Good well written poem that throws up a lot of very profound questions, which poetry should do... good one.

[Lily Mae]

Sometimes I wonder do we really choose or is it already chosen for us? When the paths narrow as you said it hit me with a sense of urgency or anxiety.. but that goes to show how I am with change lol..xo excellent write...x

[Kes]

I don't know...
This is a wonderful poem.
Keep up the hard work. :)
K

[Dayran]

When it has fully mended, I think.

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so when do I choose my stream of time?
We ask ourselves that question everyday. 100/100 =)

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. whenever you wish :) ...

. we have as much freedom as we choose to exercise ... unless our ethics and principles get manipulated by a person or situation ... IMHO ...