An Eye
A Poem by blueseeker
a black hole encompassed by blue. within, a hollow soul revealed it true.
© 2011 blueseeker
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its striking! so short and so to the point! fantastic!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Stellar. Again, I am intrigued.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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hmmm i will say its very trancing
Posted 12 Years Ago
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...a hollow soul - awaiting being filled - with the eye's sights...
"Blue eyes crying in the rain..."
Chris
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Great poem of excellent words that has an inspiring feel! Beautifully written!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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I love it...in alternative healing blue represents truth..and here I love the way you use it with the black whole. Where truth exists there is always fulfillment..xx
Posted 12 Years Ago
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. very intriguing ... very poetic ... very vivid ... very articulate ... (i missed reading you ... hope you post more often) ...
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Short, to the point.....very nice.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Added on November 26, 2011
Last Updated on November 27, 2011
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blueseeker
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discover passionately and be a fool doing so.
im very interested in the impossible questions of this universe. or possibly the choices and actions of humanity. questions will always consume my mind.. more..
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