time tour

time tour

A Poem by blueseeker

Hear the past,

from silence

to store only Earths vibrations.

Present to come,

fusing in life’s melody

gaining more movement.

Meet time with spontaneity.

….change and hum.

© 2012 blueseeker

Author's Note

wrote a while ago at a beach. please comment. opinions?

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I really enjoyed reading this. Simple & true, the type of poem that leaves the reader with a lot to think about. Nicely done!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Really enjoyed this,

life is ment to be experienced in many different ways not just confined to one corridor.

excellent poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago

If the future sounds like music, does that music change as it becomes the past? Or does the past play it's own beat, too deep in our minds to hear or understand? I gotta admit, this is one very intriguing poem

Posted 9 Years Ago

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. yes ... the most enchanting momentum of moments unraveling like mysteries that are neither too eager to be unraveled nor indifferent ... if we witness life ... it's probably because it longs to be witnessed ... beautiful poetry ...

Posted 9 Years Ago

Like you were one with the universe...or something.

Posted 9 Years Ago

there's a vibration to this, which makes sense, i suppose, but the way you've wound it in is quite mesmerizing. lovely.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Time travel is but a thought away - your poem beautifully and succinctly conveys the idea. Well written. Keep it up.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Nicely done... I liked your linking of past, present and future (Time) with vibrations...Though I'd go for the Universe and not only Earth.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I love it and the last line nails it.. :) xo

Posted 9 Years Ago

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discover passionately and be a fool doing so. im very interested in the impossible questions of this universe. or possibly the choices and actions of humanity. questions will always consume my mind.. more..

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