how i feel for you

how i feel for you

A Poem by bluessadmood
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words of love

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as tears run down your face
you know I am there to wipe them away
as you hold closer I hold you tight never letting you away
I will talk to you ,I will even sing
I will dance for you
I will play the clown just for
and you laugh,laugh my love
I just want to wipe them tears away
will do anything just for you for
I will build us castles and dreams and hopes
though holding loose in the air ,our love will hold them strong
so they are always there
I will fight the world for you
I will pave the way under your feet
I will do as no one done for my love
I will do the strangest things for my love
mock me as you like ,never care
I will always do it for my love
I will do wonders ,I will travel the world just for you
my love
I will forever want you happy
even if in a dreamy world just for us
that will be just enough for me
if you were in it

© 2008 bluessadmood


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bluessadmood
i reviewed a writing i was touched so i wrote this

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This is beautiful. You have a certain voice, even in your reviews, which is a sign that you're in touch with your inner self. Inspiration is always hard to find, but in your case, it seems to have planted a seed that grew into a lovely patch of emotion.

Apart from a few grammatical and punctuation touch-ups, you have a wonderful poem in your hands.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This is very descriptive and has good imagery. It's touching to see what a man will do for his love to be happy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful BSM! You have a lot to give in this write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what sweetly innocent sentiments...a perfect portrayal of the dreamy side of love...You've gotten to the heart of the rose, my friend :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This shows a love so strong and a protection for the one you love. It shows dreams being built from love and a future. I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this, it's so beautiful.
Expressing true feelings for a certain person is often tough, especially now a days, but reading this poem may help some to realize that the heart wants what the heart wants. You shouldn't fear showing someone how much you care-- "mock me as you like, never care". I loved that line especially.

Wonderful write-- great meaning.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This has so much dedication, so much love and such beauty flowing from it! It was just so lovley! I loved the rhyme scheme and the intense feeling I got from reading it. It was just so great! Great job!!

- Kriss

Posted 12 Years Ago


You and I think alike when it comes to love Blues.....smiles
Men should be willing to anything for the woman they love.
Great write as alway.

Kelley

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sweet, beautiful, emotional and just wonderful!
'I will fight the world for you
I will pave the way under your feet
I will do as no one done for my love
I will do the strangest things for my love'

Perfect!!!

- Kriss

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is adorable, goes rather well with my fairy tale!! Thank you for your review of my poems, i find yours a delight to read! x0x0x0x0x0x

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so sweet and tender I really enjoyed reading and feeling such emotion.
Every woman wants to hear this, that a real man loves he enough to give of
himself, so that she might return the favor. I imagine this being whispered in the ear
of your love because it's so gentle even on the computer screen. Very nice I really
liked this.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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