how i feel for you

words of love

 

as tears run down your face
you know I am there to wipe them away
as you hold closer I hold you tight never letting you away
I will talk to you ,I will even sing
I will dance for you
I will play the clown just for
and you laugh,laugh my love
I just want to wipe them tears away
will do anything just for you for
I will build us castles and dreams and hopes
though holding loose in the air ,our love will hold them strong
so they are always there
I will fight the world for you
I will pave the way under your feet
I will do as no one done for my love
I will do the strangest things for my love
mock me as you like ,never care
I will always do it for my love
I will do wonders ,I will travel the world just for you
my love
I will forever want you happy
even if in a dreamy world just for us
that will be just enough for me
if you were in it

Author's Note

i reviewed a writing i was touched so i wrote this

Reviews

[Althea Tremaine]

This is beautiful. You have a certain voice, even in your reviews, which is a sign that you're in touch with your inner self. Inspiration is always hard to find, but in your case, it seems to have planted a seed that grew into a lovely patch of emotion.

Apart from a few grammatical and punctuation touch-ups, you have a wonderful poem in your hands.

[Sasavet]

Aww I love it! It talks about love and how you will do anything for this one person, and it portrays unconditional love. I really loved it. I think everyone can relate to it :)
Beautiful

[Joselyn.]

I love it! It's so touching. I can actually relate to it, since it's how I currently feel about somebody. Also, mind showing the poem that inspired it? I'd love to read it. You can message me a link.

Thanks! ~Joselyn.

[Maria Retz]

Beautiful,
We would do almost anything for the person we really love.
What kind of poem inspired you to write this?

[Tony Hwilka]

Written as a man in love. Good write. Tony

[Lady Lazarus.]

mock me as you like ,never care
I will always do it for my love


absolutely enchanting...
love makes us braver than we ever thought possible.two lone people against the world.
a secret life that only they two can know.
your rhythm,imagery and style are all incredible.
really beautiful.

[Emily B]

Moayad,
This is amazing-beautiful. Love grows wings to carry you far away from yourself, I think. Words are an escape from our cruel world. Love and light are the key to that.

Love and light, dear friend.

[B. E. Ashley]

It defines unconditional love, true emotions and unselfish giving... what better topic to write about I don't know. Well-written verse that is open and sincere. Thank you for sharing

Elaine~

[A Forsaken Dream]

wow i bet the owner of the poem you reviewed that inspired you to write this will be flattered =].

I like this poem very much it holds much promise and immense innocence.

Keep Writing =]. I can't wait for more of your work.

-James

[*** Hey Jude***]

You definately were touched in a very powerful way that sparked such an outpouring of Love for that special one! Very Nice! ~ Jude :-)

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Now here is something straight from a poet's heart! It is honest and well written. I liked it.

Sal