The B***h

please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,

The b***h she is ...life

 

 

Author's Note

its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

Reviews

[Helena]

Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

[Nishant Gupta]

nice one do read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".

[K. Blake]

ooo, I really adore this. don't read? ha! it was very worth it.

[Emily Rae]

life certainly is a b***h but as you say, it's all we know, and so we love it.

[Just Cat]

A very strong and true account here! It reflects the bad side of life pretty well, we just have to remember that life isn't ALWAYS a b***h lol.
A good write though
:)

[Joiedevivre]

(once again i love this) hmmm i know this feeling. For me its about being defiant, putting the finger up to life and saying 'give me all you've got, I can take it all'. But I'm not always strong. Emotive bleed of a write.

[alexlessah]

it is very honest. which is really nice.

[J. Marc]

To b***h or not to b***h? I liked your poem a lot for it is real. Could not help noticing that even in Mosul, Iraq, one cannot still think about bitching! As you said, bitching can remind of something very familiar, very homey. It is reassuring for one knows how it works. However, one can also develop alternatives without denying this side of one's personality. You almost make it look like the most fantastic thing to do!
It's unapologetic too!!!

[Joiedevivre]

like this! i ve written a similar poem but didn't have the guts to publish it but maybe i will now.
I know how this feels and well conveyed.

[Audrey Howitt]

So much of where we can be is dark, I think we honestly have to acknowledge it as part of who and what we are---enjoy that part of you . . .