Your Love Torture Me

too much emotions put in a poem..I am never good at poetry..ha ha Some thoughts just wanted to get out,so i let them out ,ha ha

 

You brought me to life,and what life

You showed me beauties,i longed to see

Tell me how you manage this ,i really lost my way

Is there no way out of you,you really trapped me in this

Tell me is your love was made to torment ,but love the way you do it

Please never stop..I like the way you torture me

You brought a new meaning to love,your words showed some new lives

Wonder how you do it..magician surely you are

You haunted me day and night..is there no way to cut you out

How sweet everything is about you,even with the pains and aches you bring

How you play with my heart ..but I feel it as the biggest pleasure I ever known

What are ,who are you,those words and thoughts shook my world,my whole being

Thoughts of you jump to my mind all the time..is just there no cure from you

 

Author's Note

no rules what so ever

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow... simply love the honesty in your emotions.. we are many things as people.. it's a daily struggle.. good and bad.. some people pull us like magnets and I have felt that affect a time or too. Part of being human is having so many emotions, feelings and beliefs.. we fall.. get up.. there are no rules when it comes to matters of the heart.. we can only feel what is true to us and our surroundings.. but still hold high a dream.. a fantasy.. a belief.. a love.. a passion.. you display you have lost your way.. many have.. I have more than once.. part of being human. Your surroundings displayed; through what you have written previously; shows it would be very easy to lose your way.. being in such harsh territory. I am glad you found someone who still challenges your being.. for that is life itself through living and those we know and hold dear. Love can be such torment.. and joy.. and so many things!!! Thank you for sharing... love your honesty my friend and may your heart find peace, understanding and it's own divine love! Myself I chose to end my days in peace and love even though it pains sometimes! =)

[Poeticpiers]

You express your feelings well but in free form poeticprose not poetry

[Abd-afeez]

Could you tell me how better you could simply say your mind poetically. That definately made you say a lot in those few lines. And just as it is everyday life, disappointment come and go. The better of us will never let the same repeat itself. So to this it is necessary to find a way to stop this. That is why i love this poem better. You just want the torture to stop. You don't want it to return. It is an interesting read.t

[Colette]

You are better at poetry than you think! It still tells a story in a shorter version...emotions in a nutshell! :) It's lovely.

[Seashell]

Sheer honesty here and I am sooo luvin it !! The pain comes across as being unbearable but bearable in a way. I fully comprehend and appreciate this well penned write. Thanks for sharing this heartache cos by doing so..it helps the heart and soul. Life is so very starnge sometimes...but we live and learn.
Take care
Babs xx

[AngelEyes15]

I like this poem it's a like a love letter it's wrote nicely and the words fit together

[Stacey Watts]

Very expressive beautiful piece. Very nicely written. This was like a beautiful love letter.

[Dana Kathryn]

Hello Bluessadmood,I really love this beautifully free and deeply emotional poem!!! You do write well in poetry!! I felt a lot in reading this,your words have opened another door for me...I too have been in pain with Love,but so true how bitter sweet true love is!! Love this and wonderful job :) Dana Kathryn-

[Inner Rain]

I love the amount of honesty you placed into this. :D And it has just the right amount of "sugar-coating"... Very nice piece. Good work! :D

[Tina Kline]

A very very powerful love poem, beautiful too. Seems as if there is a little pain in this love, bittersweet perhaps, but it seems to me that love can have pain in it, and not always be a bad thing, that's just the way love is. Wonderful poem, simply wonderful. Love it.