Bloody Mary

um this is about i dream/show i saw and had... It made me not wanna look at myself anymore!!

I know what you've done

She says to me as i stare back at the mirror

This was my only true fear

I loved him but he didnt love me

But I told him we were meant to be

But as he tried to walk the door

I saw that I couldnt take it anymore

So I stabbed him in the back like he had done me

And took out his heart and made it mine

So i could look at it anytime

yes i did it you can take me away

because my love is here to stay

As my eyes bleed any i fall to the floor

I dont feel the pain you put me through anymore

And as i turn into this dark fairy

All i can say is

BLDDOY MARY!!

Author's Note

TELL ME WAT YOU THINK..

Reviews

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

Very good. I really like this!

[Talkativeted]

Emotion seems to be at the forefront of your poems and this makes them very powerful. They make the reader feel something. well done.

[I Am Svetlana]

I really like this actually, you poured out your heart in this one, very true emotions were expressed. It's difficult to love someone who doesn't love you in the same way, I'm in a situation like this with a best guyfriend of mine. Anyways, really good. Great job!