Your Voice

its something im feeling...

Your Voice is in my head everyday

Remembering everything that you say

Like how you love with all your heart

And you miss me so much

I guess that's why i love you a bunch

 But I've also learned that you love her too

And your love for her is something more true

Then what you gave me or what you would say

I should have known you wouldn't stay

So heartbreak is my fault to plain

Because i thought i could change the game

The game we played we were one

But you play it with her and do things undone

So love why do you curse me with his deep seductive voice

And why don't you ever give me a choice

Well im breaking the rules and love someone else

Because I can't have your voice to myself

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Thecreekdontrise]

I Felt like this with a guy, and still do
you said what I feel like when I with him
thank you for bringing it out.
I glad we think like this,
if we didnt who would?
(:
Thanks

[Shelby. Loves ya. :3]

great and love the rhyming

[Zerro]

So much emotion i love it

[Poetry Girl]

aww this is really good. im going to favorite it by the way. some parts of it, like when you're talking about how much you love his voice, remind me of my boy friends because theres something in his voice that i just love. anywayz, this is a greta poem and i cant think of any way that you can improve it. so keep up the good work!