I Hate That I Care

ok this guy is going to the navy and i am in love with him and i hate him all at the same time. He's a total b*****d, But he is my b*****d!!

I hate that I love when you kiss me so right

I hate that I wish you would hold me tight

I hate that I hate that i miss you and I got up set

I hate that you never loved me so i wept

I hate that I care about your feelings more then mind

I hate that I think about you all the time

I have when you make me laugh when i dont find it funny

I hate that I am your baby and you are my hubby

But you leave now so i can let go

And be with someone that can show

That they love me so much and much more then you

I just really hate the fact that I care about you!!

Author's Note

written for the love of my life but abuiser of my heart. I will miss you lots, but i can let go and love better then i ever have!!! thank you!! READ, COMMENT, SUGGEST, REVIEW...

Reviews

[McGee]

I think the sentiment of the poem is great and I do like it. One thing you might want to work on is these lines

"I hate that I hate that i miss you and I got up set
I hate that you never loved me so i wept
I hate that I care about your feelings more then mind
I hate that I think about you all the time"

They don't exactly fit with the rhyming style of the rest of the poem