He will never know

He will never know

A Poem by Im a reel vamp lover

He will never  know

 that I love him

He will never know that

I want to make he happy

As I walk beside he

down the hall all  I see is him with

another girl and  wish with all

I have that I was her. I'm the one

that will never break his heart the way she wil. He will never know that

I dream about him ever night.

He will never know that I love he all

because he is in love with anther girl.

© 2010 Im a reel vamp lover

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i loved reading this great poem

Posted 11 Years Ago

realy good.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Few typos, but it's really great poem!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago

A few grammar mistakes but doesn't change the emotion or point. Nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is really sad. To be in this situation is super hard. But I love the raw emotion that you portrayed in your poem. However, it still needs a little bit of editing and polishing. But still, great job. ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago

i like it...i can so relate...the only thing is you have a few grammar and spelling errors but besides that awesome poem

Posted 11 Years Ago

o love this poem i can relate to this alot

Posted 12 Years Ago

A few gramatical errors but still very touching and sad

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Its great but form needs a little work.

Posted 12 Years Ago

This could be better both in form and grammatically, but it's good. Shaort and simplistic yet it tells it's story with ease

Posted 12 Years Ago

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10 Reviews
Added on November 16, 2010
Last Updated on November 22, 2010
Tags: love, hurt, want, .m


Im a reel vamp lover
Im a reel vamp lover

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