A Poem by Im a reel vamp lover

Please tell me what you think i've put my heart into this.

As we seat there talking,
 knowing in ours heads what was going to happen next.
You made me promise this won't change anything. 
YOU made Me promise!!! 
I said it wont and for me it hasn't. i don't know about.
We use to be so close!
You use to call me 3 times a day. 
Just to tell me what you was doing
 You would tell me stupid, crazy, ideas that you would have, 
 Or something that you would see on T.V. that made you think of me.
Now I"m just lucky if I can get you to say 'hey' to me.
So now I won't to ask you WHY!!!
Cuz YOU made ME promise not the other way around!!
And do you wont to know what hurts the most........
I'm not the first friend you did this with.
The other girl your still there for.
You once told me that you loved me more then her.
Was you lying?
At the time I don't think so.
So now I'm seating here alone crying my eyes out for YOU!
I  shouldn't have to be!!
You should be here!
But until you realize that you was wrong 
That you miss me
I'm going to seat here and try to breathe
Try to live without you.
And I really really don't wont to

© 2012 Im a reel vamp lover

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well, words touched with love =]

Posted 11 Years Ago

Beautiful and sad poem.

Keep it up!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Posted 11 Years Ago

Love thisss Poem. Great in my opinion!!!!!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Realy amazing, Loved it.

Posted 11 Years Ago

it is said poem, with very vivid emotion. its funny how people can take you for granted,
once they know you love them, they break their promises knowing that you won't leave
as it will hurt more for you to leave them.

Posted 11 Years Ago

A promise can be broken and leave us sad wishing for better days. I like your thoughts and desire in this poem. I like the logical ending. After a time. We want separation. Thank you for the excellent poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on April 22, 2012
Last Updated on April 22, 2012


Im a reel vamp lover
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