Positive Voice

Positive Voice

A Poem by ChandraLeFay
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I have Anxiety and this is something I wrote to hopefully help me manage it a little better

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Hello there, who are you?
Do you feel lonely and empty too?

Are you me?
With all your pain and sorrow, you'd have to be.

You struggle and scream from the inside out
But still, you are so full of doubt.

I know you can hear me and maybe you don't care,
But here I am still standing here.

We can work through this,
Just us two.

We can be strong,
Me and you.

So when your alone and oh so scared,
Know that I'll always be there.

I'm your inner strength so trust in me,
For a few minutes just breathe.

I'll show you the path to inner freedom,
Those negative emotions we don't need them.

Grasp your courage and find your faith,
With me there will always be a way.

The road to happiness isn't hard to see,
You just have to let go and be free.

© 2014 ChandraLeFay


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I like the depth of this write...the inner voice telling you it's going to be -- if you let it come forth and the entirety of the read is in a positive light...just takes the reader in the verse and finds a way to be the person in the read itself...and what they are experiencing...

Posted 5 Years Ago


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great work......that is me nice work

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing message I really can relate to it. It touched me really deeply and personally


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great message, I enjoyed this greatly, Thanks for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'll show you the path to inner freedom,
Those negative emotions we don't need them....

That is just amazing. You really are an amazing writer. Nice work! I will be coming back to keep reading these amazing pieces.

Best,

Laurara Monique

http://lauraramargosian.com/

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the depth of this write...the inner voice telling you it's going to be -- if you let it come forth and the entirety of the read is in a positive light...just takes the reader in the verse and finds a way to be the person in the read itself...and what they are experiencing...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so ironic. I have high anxiety when it comes to heights. And your last line says: "Let go and be free." LOL That is kind of my problem you know? I have a fear of falling and then of course landing hard!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow... This poem, trust me, will actually change lives... Amazing... I think you found your voice.. And it's awesome...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ChandraLeFay

6 Years Ago

Thanks ^.^ that is such an amazing compliment and confidence boost
Like the spirit at the end of the poem. great written

thanks for share

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

╰☆╮I used to have horrible anxiety problems, and my best friend has them extremely bad right now. It is a burden to deal with, but this poem is inspiring.╰☆╮

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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The road to happiness isn't hard to see,
You just have to let go and be free....

Such a wonderful message you gave friend really in life we need to get out those hurting corners and be free with the soul....Very nice poem and the rhythm is seen throughout your lines! Nice work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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