Positive Voice

I have Anxiety and this is something I wrote to hopefully help me manage it a little better

Hello there, who are you?

Do you feel lonely and empty too?

Are you me?

With all your pain and sorrow, you'd have to be.

You struggle and scream from the inside out

But still, you are so full of doubt.

I know you can hear me and maybe you don't care,

But here I am still standing here.

We can work through this,

Just us two.

We can be strong,

Me and you.

So when your alone and oh so scared,

Know that I'll always be there.

I'm your inner strength so trust in me,

For a few minutes just breathe.

I'll show you the path to inner freedom,

Those negative emotions we don't need them.

Grasp your courage and find your faith,

With me there will always be a way.

The road to happiness isn't hard to see,

You just have to let go and be free.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I like the depth of this write...the inner voice telling you it's going to be -- if you let it come forth and the entirety of the read is in a positive light...just takes the reader in the verse and finds a way to be the person in the read itself...and what they are experiencing...

[Wórdsmíth]

Very beautiful poem. We're all in pain and sorrow finding some lights of courage and freedom. Here I see a great message you send to us that we all should hear the voice of our inner what it speaks up to us building some roads of happiness. I like your words of wisdom.

[Calissa Knox]

"Grasp your courage and find your faith,
With me there will always be a way."

This poem is full of insight and truth - a great reminder that we are all responsible for our own happiness and inner peace.

I really enjoyed reading this. :)

- Feather

[A. Amos]

Wow! I have to admit this one the best poetic conversation, I have ever read:)

[Sourav]

Nice... ends with a positive note. Well written!

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write. Thank you for penning and sharing...:)......................

[PurpleQuartz]

This poem shows you are a very strong person, and you have courage in you. I doubt myself constantly and this brilliant poem was a reminder to myself as well.

[Jeannear]

very well written :).....

[koty bell]

I felt as if u were a guiding light for anyone struggling in life! This poem gives a lot of hope :-)

[Pradeep Nair]

a self exploration sort of poetry, which is so beautiful.
of course, we can be strong..

[Walter]

I picture a mirror a I read and reread this.....beautifully done with a big inspirational ending.