Positive Voice

Positive Voice

A Poem by Lissianna
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I have Anxiety and this is something I wrote to hopefully help me manage it a little better

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Hello there, who are you?
Do you feel lonely and empty too?

Are you me?
With all your pain and sorrow, you'd have to be.

You struggle and scream from the inside out
But still, you are so full of doubt.

I know you can hear me and maybe you don't care,
But here I am still standing here.

We can work through this,
Just us two.

We can be strong,
Me and you.

So when your alone and oh so scared,
Know that I'll always be there.

I'm your inner strength so trust in me,
For a few minutes just breathe.

I'll show you the path to inner freedom,
Those negative emotions we don't need them.

Grasp your courage and find your faith,
With me there will always be a way.

The road to happiness isn't hard to see,
You just have to let go and be free.

© 2014 Lissianna


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I like the depth of this write...the inner voice telling you it's going to be -- if you let it come forth and the entirety of the read is in a positive light...just takes the reader in the verse and finds a way to be the person in the read itself...and what they are experiencing...

Posted 6 Years Ago


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I like the discipline of your poem which flows smoothly. The imagery is beautiful with soft metaphors.

With much love,
sayed

Posted 7 Years Ago


That's wonderful. Honestly, it reminds me of my best friend and I. We made a promise just like this!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Life's surrounded by too many evils, these evils never let us know abut the life more to live. When we got a path to reach the inner essence of the soul, we learn to live freely with freedom. Emotions always give the pain but after the pain, a light comes and washes away our tears and put us into a world of freedom but only if we hear the voice of the heart. The path where w''re on's not to touch to .. it's we who make the path difficult to move on, we just have to say everything "LET IT BE, LET IT BE" .. then ever thing'll be allright and we'll know the right path of the life where to go. We've to be free if we really want to live the life freely from our stress, from our struggle what we do for getting somthing or wishing to get something or everything in the life. We've to live with happiness spreading the love everywhere. It's a good poem you made, i liked the poem, i heard the voice...A Positive Voice. Great job. Keep writing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


A good way to break a cycle and catch a breath

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lovely stuff, is this about your inner confidence?

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lissianna

7 Years Ago

Yes,that is the direction I was going in :)
Not a bad poem at all, reading these words will surely help someone dealing with confidence issues as much as writing it out helped you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I’m not exactly sure what the message was, but I liked it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lissianna

7 Years Ago

Its written as if your talking to your self confidence and your self confidence is reassuring you th.. read more
SquinklaPsyOps

7 Years Ago

Wow, that is genious, left in aww.
This was beautiful, inspirational and uplifting. Your words are like a smile reflected in everyones mirrors in the times when they need a grin the most. I could hear the happiness in the tone within your words. Each line seemed to push up the chin of the reader, as if a pair of bright eyes were looking up at them, saying, it's okay... you can do it.

I loved how this piece left me with a warm and fuzzy feeling inside. Like a cup of hot cocoa on a cold winters night, or that perfectly soft and gooey chocolate chip cookie, fresh our of mothers oven.

Great Ink! Thanks for sharing!
Aaron - Wolfwind

Posted 7 Years Ago



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