Mine

Mine

A Poem by Lissianna
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More old stuff I found

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Skin on skin

Almost like a sin


Feeling our desire

Like liquid fire


Warm embrace

So safe


Heart melting like ice

Feels so soothing and nice


Trembling inside

Knowing your mine

© 2016 Lissianna


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I really like the way you made your second line relevant to your first in a matching rhythm ! Good work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It sounded like a good ole song. Bravo.............

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Added on October 22, 2014
Last Updated on September 23, 2016
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Lissianna
Lissianna

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Aspiring poet/writer, I have a variety of hobbies and interests and have a bubbly personality once you get to know me. I've been going through a bit of a hiatus lately due to writers block and other e.. more..

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