Incomplete

Incomplete

A Poem by Lissianna

Its memories of you that keep me awake at night

You once made my heart burn so bright


Now I feel so empty and torn

All the tears I'm holding inside could create a storm


Thought you felt the same ,as I felt about you

Tell me do you ever think of me or miss me too


Why did you go and break the walls of my heart down

If you didn't plan on sticking around

You made me feel so alive and free

I never wanted you to leave


I trusted you and started to fall farther and farther

If I had known you weren't going to catch me I wouldn't have bothered


When I was with you I felt like I could be the real me

Now I see how broken I will always be


You were never mine, yet I'm like a moth to the flame

My foolish heart still yearns and cries your name


I'll be fine, that's what I'll say

While deep inside its a struggle to get through the day


Don't promise everything will be okay, not to shed a tear

When I'm choking and drowning and your not here


I should have known you were too good to be true

So why do I still care about someone who left me cold and blue


You had found my missing piece

But then you took it with you, leaving me once again incomplete

© 2016 Lissianna


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Nice rhyme scheme and beautiful in that manner of writing. The flow is consistently good.

Lovely poem, Fay!

Good!

Sorry, I'm quite wasted and I'm having trouble typing and such. ;D

Posted 4 Years Ago



"Yet I'm like a moth to the flame My foolish heart still yearns and cries your name"
-What incredible imagery. Just very well done, overall. Thank you for sharing this.



Posted 4 Years Ago


I think i like your writing style , hate to be redundant but nice flow, love the rhymes that actually tell a story,

Posted 4 Years Ago


Very nice imagery reminds me of a poem I wrote called soulmate...well done.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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