Remember Me

Remember Me

A Poem by Charlie
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very short but very powerful (kind of)

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All in all, I have no regrets. 

The sun still shines, the sun still sets. 

The heart forgives, the heart forgets. 

One more kiss, even though it's come to this. 

I'll close my eyes and make a wish... 

Hoping you'll remember.

© 2011 Charlie


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Good ending, the whole piece is simple yet elegent.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great piece, wrapped up nicely with a black bow.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A real little treat, most readable. Top draw.
*bird*

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow! I love the flow of this poem, and the imagery. It's a great poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I adore it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow. Dark and good! Love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


a sentiment captured. a life moment that happens. well put.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Even though this is really short, it portrays a ton of emotion. It's like it captures just one moment of a night or something.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Charlie
Charlie

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