Not a poem

Not a poem

A Poem by frozensakura

 I should have just said what was on my mind

Should have said 
I'm a mess


I'm breaking down
I need a hug 


stop asking what's wrong 
Shut up 


let me cry

let me cry until I can't cry anymore

But of course I didn't

© 2013 frozensakura

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emo..gave up on breakups until people evolve...could take i just love a selfish lil buddhist

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Why is this called "Not a poem"? I'm curious. I like your enjambment in the poem, the way it makes the words seem broken - just like the emotions you're conveying. Nice work.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Many people feel or felt this way. you wrote this very well. I wish you the best for your troubles to go away.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Words you wish that you can take back but it's too late or the feelings of loneliness is what I got. At some parts it sounded awkward and incomplete, but I liked the simplicity and what the poem implies.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Ah, you can never take back what you never said. I love that theme. The poem is really emotional and easily to relate to. There are some lines that don't exactly flow, per se, but in a whole this poem is gold. (^A^)

Posted 6 Years Ago

I can definitely relate to this poem and I'm sure a lot of other people can too. Love it!

Posted 6 Years Ago

I really liked it

Posted 6 Years Ago

Very deep, I love it.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Oh, how many times I could have said just that. It is so very heartfelt.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Really good poem. I like the rhythm!

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Added on April 16, 2013
Last Updated on April 16, 2013



Riverbank, CA

names athena. middle names dayana, so ppl end up calling me day, dai, die-die, etc. So, feel free to call me Dayana ^_^ lawlz itz teh name i use 4 mi fbook nd vampirefreakz O.e so if u want, u can fri.. more..

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