Love In The Aftermath

Love In The Aftermath

A Poem by frozensakura

its simple to see

that this 'love' you have for me

is nothing but a lie

 

this 'love' you have is forced

its tormenting me everyday

yet i try to avoid

to shed tears over useless things

 

just tell me the truth

im tired of all the lies

that you tell me

and yourself

 

© 2011 frozensakura


Author's Note

frozensakura
muchos thanks to Amanda for help with teh title :) -Athena

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I love the last line, it almost gives the whole thing a twist. I think it's good how you put love in apostrophes. It gives it a different meaning in context.

Posted 7 Years Ago


LOVE the last line :) Too many people lie to themselves even harder than they lie to those around them :) Great work, well done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice! like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


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haha nice poem i like it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


i like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


this reminds me of the end of one of my relationships.we said we loved each other, it turned into a lie we didn't want to believe.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Unrequited love. Sometimes it's best to be the first to say it out loud.... some people stay in relationships not loving the other person but waits patiently, because they fear that their decision will hurt the other.

It's nice though to see this from the other point of view. Knowing that the one you are with does not love you and still waits to hear him/her say it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Simplistic yet it has deep emotion. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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