...

I wish I wish with all my heart
just to see you once again
I miss you very much
it's just not the same with you gone

there's a hole in our heart
and silence in the air
to leave so sudden
hurt so bad

you were my aunty
and I will never forget
the fun we had and times we shared
for all these memories will be treasured
I love you so much
and know your okay, never in pain
and I will try to stay sane
but I still feel empty inside
without you here by my side

I look around and see you everywhere
everything makes me think of you
I look through old photographs
and see you there by my side, holding my hand
and I start to cry
the pain returns, and I wanna die
I know your with me
as I get stronger everyday

uncle misses you like crazy
and cries everyday
for he can't wait to see you again

you were his first and only love
your parents thought your love was rash
you vow your vows and said "I do"
and together till the end was held forever true


We love Aunty Tammy always and forever may you rest in peace, to never be forgotten
2.12.11

Author's Note

I wrote this at 1am, cause i couldn't sleep... it fails...
~Nichole Marie Nehring<3

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

I lost people who aren't close to me like my cousin but I know how hard it is to lose someone especially when they meant a lot to you... if I can go back in time I wish I will be able to spend time with my cousin so her death would really be a loss and not just something that happened one day.

[frozensakura]

i know what you mean :(

This is a really touching piece, written with love, therefor, it does not fail. ^..^
My favourite part was the second stanza, not entirely sure why, but I like it.
Well done, keep writing.

[Melissa Edmunds]

Omg.. This is so amazing. I recently lost my brother and this brought all of the pain back I so understand the random thought and the way your feelings bounce around.. Love it.

[BiroPen]

dont be so harsh on her S4MFrost. its a traumatic experience loosing someone close to you. its a good poem, very emotional. well done chole.

[S4MFrost]

The sentiments are there, but the poem itself is pretty cliche. Not only that, but there are quite a few grammar mistakes that I get the feeling were accidental. I would suggest waiting until the next morning to publish your poetry. It will give you a chance to proofread and whatnot.

[KAREN]

BEAUTIFUl!!! And heartfelt!

[?]

Awww this is so sad but yet beautiful and precious.
It is so hard when we loose a loved one. They stay and forever will remain in our hearts. Very beautiful

[Dayran]

.........missing...........someone...........whom..........we...........love.

[EMF]

A sad poem, and deeply personal. I won't degrade the feelings by further comment beyond a Thank You for posting it

[WritersSoul]

I was listening to a sad song while reading this, and it actually pricked tears in my eyes :O :') its a very sad poem and great flow with it :) excellent poem :)

[Ace D Portgas]

Aww this is a sad poem, but no it doesn't fail...A lot of people can relate to something like this...I'm sorry for your loss

A very emotional poem