She is...

She is...

A Poem by frozensakura

She Isn't some outstandingly beautiful girl
Or someone striving for perfection
Her face isn't caked in makeup

Why hide away her imperfections
When she knows she has flaws?

she's insecure

Quiet
unnoticed 
But always giving her all 

Holding onto the love she's been fortunately given
Holding on to the little things in life that make her happy 
Her family, her friends, and of corse... the one she loves the most

If only he'd open his eyes and see
She's tried all her life to be
everything he'll ever want and need

If only he'd see...
How much he means to me

© 2012 frozensakura


Author's Note

frozensakura
Well yea.. :/
Will he ever notice how much she loves him?
Is being loved and cared for such a bad thing..?

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You touch a subject with questions and emotions within this poem that many go through. Nice write, especially like this part:
"Why hide away her imperfections
When she knows she has flaws? "

Posted 5 Years Ago


wonderful job. i enjoyed reading this

Posted 6 Years Ago


This reminds me of that Taylor Swift song "You Belong With Me". Your writing has a nice flow to it and i liked it very much. It portrays the typical teenage girl very well. Good job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is wonderful. Thank you for sharing..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

frozensakura

6 Years Ago

thanks!!
You're great, Ms. Athena... I have a friend who's like that to and the guy was quite rude to her saying something mean and giving his number only to say he don't want to reply....

Posted 7 Years Ago


frozensakura

7 Years Ago

thanks !!
its a really sweet and nice poem and could be a brilliant basis for a short story x

Posted 7 Years Ago


frozensakura

7 Years Ago

thanks !!
Beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


frozensakura

7 Years Ago

thanks !!
Being Humble and true to yourself is a gift...everyone has flaws but whats most important is our insides, not sure if he will ever notice but one day he might regret it if he doesnt.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"and of corse" I think you meant "course". It's funny how this happens for guys too, I'm all too familiar with this kind of scenario. Good work, and I think it's great when a woman barely uses any makeup or none at all. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


frozensakura

7 Years Ago

thanks!
Peaceworker22

7 Years Ago

No trouble at all, the pleasure is all mine. : )
This is a great poem :) I love this the person is willing to be completely herself, and no matter how little she has, appreciates it, giving her all to someone who has yet to notice her brilliance. great work :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


frozensakura

7 Years Ago

thanks!

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