Matter and Chatter

Matter and Chatter

A Poem by boyinblue
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haiku for the contest.

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If all there is
comes through these eyes
then could not all I desire, leave them?

© 2010 boyinblue


Author's Note

boyinblue
thoughts about reality. I sound soo stupid writing 3 lines to sum up my thoughts. lol, but that`s haiku I guess.

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nah, you don't sound stupid.
one reason I like reading a haiku is because the people writing them seem so damned smart, getting their point across in only 3 lines, haha.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A short, succint, piercing style and point. Good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


its good that you elaborated your thoughts in short lines

Posted 13 Years Ago


actually it sounds very nice and meaningful

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 7, 2010
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