Hate. hate. HATE.

Hate. hate. HATE.

A Poem by Adam :P
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short to the point. wanted to add more and make it longer but can't get my thinkin to get going. so im leave it this.

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She left a note for you beloved,

To slit your throat it would be good.

And put everything she hates in one line.

(your name here)

© 2010 Adam :P


Author's Note

Adam :P
haha. kinda mean.

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Wow, I must say mortal I LOVE this! Very deep, emotional and just... how should I put it? Blunt? Urgh, I don't think that's the word I'm looking for, but it'll do. This is amazing, I loved it, the brutality is just great and that final line; wow! Awesome writing here, very well done indeed~

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Well that was certainly a slap in the face! Makes me feel guilty, yikes!

Well done! That was a rude awakening!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a bloody amazing statement and i'm not dening this it could be true for so many people

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it, a very powerful statement, that's for sure.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beloved hate - the fine line of weakness in vulnerability when love turns bitter

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mean, but somewhat nice. i really like it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mean, emotional, but true. These are the thoughts of some people to others, to wish they would just die and be gone forever. So the other wouldn't have to bother with them anymore. Wonderful imagery! Loved it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice, Sweet and to the point. It reminds me of a mean but amazing song I love. =D

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, I must say mortal I LOVE this! Very deep, emotional and just... how should I put it? Blunt? Urgh, I don't think that's the word I'm looking for, but it'll do. This is amazing, I loved it, the brutality is just great and that final line; wow! Awesome writing here, very well done indeed~

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bitter.
Full of emotion.
Nice imagery.
All in all, GREAT job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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