Sonnet: A Bite of Pomegranate

Sonnet: A Bite of Pomegranate

A Poem by Brandee D. Hack

For Kaitlin Bevis


A love forever

time to take flight

over oceans and valley’s

ever to ignite.

Though Persephone wishes

much change to come.

That bite from hunger

has her all but done.

Hades keeps her

within the chamber so deep

sparks flying high

though Demetre shall weep.

Love at it’s finest

shall bind others with kindness.

© 2013 Brandee D. Hack

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Zainul -- I suppose my own type (not conforming to someone else's style there) and it's like a trance. It rhymes within its self and some lines when it wishes. My poem's tend to have a mind of their own. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

Love the nice work.
What's the type and rhyming pattern of your sonnet?

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on May 16, 2013
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Brandee D. Hack
Brandee D. Hack

Ireland Co.

Hello all. My name is Brandee. I have wrote many different genres of writings for many years. I hope that by putting it up that that will help me get some feedback and constructive criticism. .. more..