Starry Silence

Starry Silence

A Poem by Brandee D. Hack
"

Just a memory...

"
You wait for a silence,
I wait for words.
You look at my eyes,
You're so unobserved.

You look at me softly,
and I have changed you.

Then I look into the memories
they whirl past us so softly.
Like the pictures that pass
We spin into faded glass...

Then I touch your hand
and you touch my heart.
Then we are both changed
right off the start mark.

You look at me softly,
and I have changed you.

There is one thing
that I must do.
So I have a plan
one you must understand.

I am in starry silence
a world beyond dreams.
In this plane
I am unseen.

Then you glow like a comet
a fallen star are you.
You take my heart
glowing like a brilliant hue.



© 2010 Brandee D. Hack


Author's Note

Brandee D. Hack
About that perfect moment... <3

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A beautiful poem of love and hope. When we are overcome with love. Ain't no better day in a life. I like the last lines.
Then you glow like a comet
"a fallen star are you.
You take my heart
glowing like a brilliant hue. "
A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Ce poème fait mon coeur sentir la lumière. Cela est un beau poème.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A beautiful poem of love and hope. When we are overcome with love. Ain't no better day in a life. I like the last lines.
Then you glow like a comet
"a fallen star are you.
You take my heart
glowing like a brilliant hue. "
A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Brandee D. Hack
Brandee D. Hack

Ireland Co.



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Hello all. My name is Brandee. I have wrote many different genres of writings for many years. I hope that by putting it up that that will help me get some feedback and constructive criticism. .. more..

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