More national parks

This is a persuasive essay.

National parks are really beautiful and you can have good experiences. That is why I think we should have more national parks. Like three reasons are it will make a better environment there will be more money from tourists and it's a good bonding time.

My primary reason is we need a better environment by making more national parks we have less pollution because more trees can make carbon dioxide in the oxygen. Plus with more national parks we can have more trees than more animals can live without being hunted.

My second reason is that national parks will get more money if more people visit. With more money they can give the workers better pay and lower what people have to pay to get in. Plus they can make a better way to get into the park. They can make some national parks bigger.

My third reason is that it's a good time to bond with someone and learn about them plus you can go hiking camping and swimming. When I visited Yellowstone National Park it was really fun but it was great exercise and I learned a lot about wildlife.

I strongly believe that we should have more national parks because it is better for the environment. The national parks get more money from tourists plus it is a good bonding time. I hope you have enjoyed learning about my opinion on national parks.

    

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[DRAGO]

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