I Betrayed You

You were always there...

By my side at all times...

But I betrayed you.

You loved me even though...

You somehow always new...

That I betrayed you.

That night you found me...

With the other man...

You knew I betrayed you.

You said that you still loved me...

And that you would never stop...

Yet you caught me betraying you.

Now I know that I didn't betray just you...

But I betrayed myself...

Because I still love you to.

 

Reviews

[Emmy]

woah. i like how you did the text font and size for the word: betrayed

[~As.I.Am~]

Wow, this is super deep. It's sad that we hurt the ones we love.

[Amorelle]

I liked it ^-^
The only thing I would say is not changing the red 'betrayed' into 'betraying' at the end. It kind of kills the mojo and then the last 'to' should be 'too'.
Other than that I liked it :D

[ruth]

i really like this poem, its honest and "betrayed" in red emphazised the meaning of your poem

[Gheeneil]

A rose is still beautiful and lovely despite its thorns. And, so is love. Regardless the storm, it still chooses to stay until you embrace it back. Nice one.

[scott]

i like it

[Spoken]

Awesome! I love how you changed the size of "betrayed", making it smaller.. as we often feel when we do something wrong. Very nice!

[17thWhitePrince]

wow ... wow ... wow
great poem !!!
I really really like everything about it !!!
it's great !!!
the words in red ... wow !!!
that was one of my favorite poems I have ever read thus far !!!
it's going in my favorites !!!
awesome piece I must say !!!

[Mintwhiskers]

I LOVE IT MEGAN IT IS AWESOME GREAT MEANING TOO
I GOT A NEW TRASH CAN CALLED HERBERT

[Nathaniel]

interesting concept
enjoyable, flowing
may need a quick check
otherwise i loved it