I never thought

I never thought

A Poem by la_laland29

I never thought, that one day my heart would fall.
Your hands would let go.
Your eyes would look away.
Your mind would clear.
My heart would shatter.
I never wanted to believe that maybe you caused my pain.
crying every night because I loved you and you never noticed how much.
I gave myself to you, and you pushed me away when you got what you wanted.
When you saw something new.
Like a child with a new toy, i was the old toy, left to collect dust.
But now, i no longer need you.
I can breath again.
My pieces picked up again.
Please, this once I want something real.
I hope that your the one for me.

© 2010 la_laland29


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

A very painful message. But one that most can relate to. Heartbreak is inevitable, but it truly destroys us in every way possible. I can relate. It's so difficult to move on and to trust again, but your poem explores the concept of hope and rebuilding oneself. A happy ending for an otherwise somber poem. Beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

206 Views
1 Review
Added on November 9, 2010
Last Updated on November 9, 2010

Author

la_laland29
la_laland29

Turner/Sorrento, ME



About
name:Bri Status: sick and tired of cheaters age:15 where I live: Maine (sadly) Where am I able to let go? I'm nothing more nothing less. My writing lets my feelings out. Stupid boys, cheaters are.. more..

Writing
No way No way

A Poem by la_laland29


Forever? Forever?

A Poem by la_laland29