Cry

Cry

A Poem by breaking_heart

People cry,
Not because they're weak
They've just been strong for too long

© 2015 breaking_heart


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Bravo! It's as though Octavio Paz handed you his pen!

Regards,
Al

Posted 4 Years Ago


First off, you make me think of Chuck Norris. Chuck Norris doesn't have to cry, but Chuck Norris wants the world to know it's okay to cry. That's automatic 30 points in the Rating meter.

Short and sweet, that's 15 points. Another 15 points for sarcasm.

Content and tags get you another 10 points. Good Job, I give you a 70 out of 100.

Posted 4 Years Ago


excellent...such perfect insight in three short lines.



Posted 4 Years Ago


yeah.... that was tight..........


Posted 4 Years Ago


You have said so much in so few words. Well done.

:) Julie

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sounds like hundreds of people's feelings. Kudos. Valentine

Posted 4 Years Ago


didn't even have to fill a page to get the point across. love it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Very true. This says so much in just three little lines.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Cat
Wonderful. A different take on vulnerability.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Your words are true. We need to release sadness and tears. Very good use of words. You are a good writing. Hard to make your point using so few words. You can. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on August 8, 2015
Last Updated on August 8, 2015
Tags: sad, depression, depressed, suicide, suicidal

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breaking_heart
breaking_heart

Toronto, Canada



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I am going through a hard time and decided to write. I'm not a good writer. I'm 15, so I'm not too experienced. My punctuation will be sloppy. Same with my grammar. Please excuse that. Thank you more..

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