Just A Dream

Just A Dream

A Poem by breaking_heart

This is part of a song my friends and I wrote two years ago.

I miss your laugh
I miss your smile
But I also miss mine too

You make me so happy
I'm so lonely
I'm so helpless

All the memories we held
Our fancy dinners
Late night movies
And suddenly we fell

© 2015 breaking_heart

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Thank you for sharing. Very nice, I would like to hear or read the rest of the lyrics for sure.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I like the poetry. I like the poetry that leave the reader with a open ending. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the sad ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Nice,but it feels unfinished...maybe it's supposed to.

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

It's part of a song that my friends and I wrote a few years ago
I like this piece. Nicely written.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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4 Reviews
Added on August 12, 2015
Last Updated on August 12, 2015
Tags: sad, depression, depressed, suicide, suicidal, love



Toronto, Canada

I am going through a hard time and decided to write. I'm not a good writer. I'm 15, so I'm not too experienced. My punctuation will be sloppy. Same with my grammar. Please excuse that. Thank you more..

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