Giving up

Giving up

A Poem by Breanna Riddle

I fought so hard
To be where I am
And you just come up
And push me in the sand

You act like
This is all my doing
You did this to me
You are why I'm crumbling

Everything I say 
It always comes out wrong
Even when it short and sweet
You say it's way too long

Here's a news flash
Just for you
I'm not going to change
Or fight any longer
It's easier to just give up

© 2016 Breanna Riddle


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Very nice moral ending and be true to yourself is great advice, too bad many people make slaves of themselves to other peoples want and desires. Standing Ovation! Five out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Breanna Riddle

8 Years Ago

lol Thank you :) I really appreciate you taking your time to read and review. It really means a lot

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Added on March 19, 2016
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Breanna Riddle
Breanna Riddle

Mechanicsville, MD



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I'm 16 years old. I live in Maryland, and I love writing. I honestly think poetry is the only reason why i like writing and i wouldn't of found it if my mom didn't die. more..

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