You.

You.

A Poem by Suzy Q

You tell me you love me

Then why don't I exist the next day?

I want this to work out, but you see

I'm broken. So what do you say,

Come and heal my wounds?

Would it be helpful if I just disappear?

Just please come back for me soon,

Losing you is my greatest fear.

 

Why won't the tears leave my eyes?

Am I too frustrated to cry?

I miss your arms,

Seems your kisses have done me harm.

They make me need you

Although that's nothing new,

Not that you care

You wouldn't dare.

 

© 2011 Suzy Q


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This is a great write.
It may help release pain and frustration.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A beautiful, lonely cry of pain.
You reminded me of what it would be like...

Posted 12 Years Ago


very nicely written. I like the emotion and the heartbroken sorrow. Very nice. And hopefully if this is a real feeling, you feel better soon.

Posted 12 Years Ago


amzing and tragically beautiful what happened /!0.0

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love the way that you accurately portrayed these emotions..Well done..xx


Posted 12 Years Ago



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Suzy Q
Suzy Q

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