a gust of winds

a gust of winds

A Poem by Latifa
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it's a poem about need of change and confusion

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I want a gust of winds to take me away oh please take me away I want a gust of winds to break the chains I want a gust of winds to bring the change I want of gust of winds that crush the doors , that breaks the walls opening new ones for new roads I want a gust of winds to wipe out the verges so that I can broaden my searches I want a gust of winds to carry out my dream oh please carry out my dream bring it to me , let me know it , let me feel it , let me touch it hope , love , wishes words that seem vague and lost blocked by a heavy stone , by a bleak cloud so I'm shouting out loud let me know , let me change , let me call my self, my inner , my soul

© 2013 Latifa


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It is a very lovely poem with the nice imagery. I enjoyed it and the quality was intense and I am very elated by your nice work. This is poetry and I loved the compare of winds and love ,
The letter ( I) I i always comes capital no matter where you are in the speech.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Yes,all of us need a gust of wind to change and go ahead.
Nice write,Latifa.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Keep you inner soul,keep it fed, find time in the day just to sit, just to be, for you and your soul,need quiet to be, to be light.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lovely. I like the strong sense of longing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I loved it! Your use of repetition was excellent. I enjoyed the use of wind to mean Freedom

Posted 7 Years Ago


Soooo beautiful and soooo nice. i enjoyed the poem and the meanings...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is a very lovely poem with the nice imagery. I enjoyed it and the quality was intense and I am very elated by your nice work. This is poetry and I loved the compare of winds and love ,
The letter ( I) I i always comes capital no matter where you are in the speech.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

please you guys i'm open up to see your reviews thanks

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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