your life

your life

A Poem by Latifa
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this is one of my first poems that i did back in days about 3 years ago so i hope you enjoy it guys

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It starts with a scream
the first voice you do when you arrive to this realm
you glow like the sun
when you're full of fun
you learn from diffrent expriences
and you become fearless
you rise and you fall
but by time you become like a strong sturdy wall
you get happy when you win
and your face draw that big grin
when you loose you get sad
but it's not always bad
you shine when you love
like the stars above
sometimes you miss your chances 
but you also learn that giving up is all nonsense
sometimes you loose your inner balance 
and it's like a hurricane destroyed a beautiful palace
you wonder why do all good things come to an end 
but it doesn't matter as long as you have in your side a good friend
a friend you can relie on 
in the crises and when your heart is torn
you laugh and cry
you live and you die
but this is the way it is 
so enjoy your time cause everything is going to be fine

© 2013 Latifa


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Ah the optimist, keep this poem, life will test you, and you will need your words to set yourself back right.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Latifa

7 Years Ago

i shall remember them inshallah
"a friend you can relie( rely ) on

in the crises and when your heart is torn

you laugh and cry

you live and you die

but this is the way it is

so enjoy your time cause everything is going to be fine"

I like the message and the wisdom in this poem. It is very realistic...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Latifa

7 Years Ago

thanks fellow poet
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Inspiring! this really inspires me! nice poem! :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Latifa

7 Years Ago

thanks dear
please you guys review it

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Latifa

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