wrath of a child

this poem encompass what i believe the children of wars are going through so enjoy it please

Upon the crumbling walls i stood

Through the deteriorating roofs i looked

I gazed around the shattering windows

I listened to the dreary screams of widows

The life i knew so well slipped from me 

In a sudden moment of utter melancholy

I wandered aimlessly

I cried a piercing shriek that reached the deepest sea

Where are you mother ?

Where have you gone father ?

Why did you abandon me brother ?

The sky sobbed with me

The subtle breeze of the world consoled me

For you have missiles

I have tears

For you have rifles 

I have smiles

I shall clad my self in the cloak of innocence

I shall engulf my heart into convalescence

You conceal your face into disguise

You look at me with cunning eyes

Tittering and laughing on your own lies

For i , i shall rebel my friends

So believe me this is not the end

From the past i depart

From the  sad memories i walk

For i'm ought to carry the flag of liberty

And anchor my name to eternity

Reviews

[M. Stein]

Your description and imagery, love, is superb! Very, very well written!

[ANTO]

The words of Bobby Sands came to me when i read this poem Latifah, "Our revenge shall be the laughter of our children."
I can't say anything more than that.

[Latifa]

please review it guys and tell me what you think