serenity

serenity

A Poem by Latifa
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this poem is for any one who is asking for ease and serenity as of my self

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I beseech serenity to seize my soul
For it i shall make my heart the most noble abode
I sought to grasp the sunken lull
For it to ease the abundant load
I shall embellish my heart with orchid flowers 
For it i shall envelope my heart with golden hedges
I crave for the lucid powers
For it i roll the carpet of silver edges
I'm awakening my soul from the lurking sedation
For it i pledge to fight the dour beast
I shall scat through the tunnel of salvation 
For it i wait for the beaming rays at the east

© 2013 Latifa


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"I shall embellish my heart with orchid flowers
For it i shall envelope my heart with golden hedges"
Many kinds of salvation. I like the journey you took me in your words. I like the above lines. A perfect ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


very nicely done...well structured and worded...and a pleasant requesting for the always much needed serenity on top of it all

Posted 7 Years Ago


to beseech serenity is poetic, to use rhyme is fine. The very nature of the write leads to kinetically using words and the grammar they form. I enjoyed. Tom

Posted 7 Years Ago


Latifa

7 Years Ago

thank you for the review
Keep writing =)......................

Posted 7 Years Ago


Latifa

7 Years Ago

i will inshallah
Its like a spell, captivating..i like this

Posted 7 Years Ago


So lovely! An affirmation of sorts....beautiful x

Posted 7 Years Ago


I felt like the poem didnt flow as well as i'd like. Though, I did like the vocab (big words) you used.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Latifa

7 Years Ago

thanks i'll take your words under consideration
This is beautiful. I'm glad you entered my contest!!!!!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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I enjoyed the feeling of hope and triumph in this piece...Rose:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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