serenity

this poem is for any one who is asking for ease and serenity as of my self

I beseech serenity to seize my soul

For it i shall make my heart the most noble abode

I sought to grasp the sunken lull

For it to ease the abundant load

I shall embellish my heart with orchid flowers 

For it i shall envelope my heart with golden hedges

I crave for the lucid powers

For it i roll the carpet of silver edges

I'm awakening my soul from the lurking sedation

For it i pledge to fight the dour beast

I shall scat through the tunnel of salvation 

For it i wait for the beaming rays at the east

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Serenity personified....so very lovely. Filled with hope and uplifting. I liked this a lot. Lydi**

[Latifa]

thank you lydia your words are most welcome

[ron]

This is beautiful. You have penned feelings I have so well. You have made me smile and given me hope that love and serenity can be found. Thank you.

[wordman]

you have a vivid imiganation,loved the theme great job
and thanks for the friend invitation didn't have time yesterday to write

[Latifa]

you're most welcome thanks for the great comment

[Aethereal]

It was very creative of you to personify Serenity, and then invite her into your soulful abode where she may rid you of that "dour beast", and bring you "beaming rays" from the East. I enjoyed the rhyme sequence.

[ThoughtsofShyann]

i really liked it! in the beging it sounded like a spell which I thought was pretty cool!

[Eva Rosehill]

Such beautiful imagination and imagery in this piece.. I loved it.

[M. Stein]

The first two stances alone hold so much power and meaning behind them. A very good, solid write from start to end. Thank you for sharing. xx

[Latifa]

much thanks i'm glad you like it

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice poem...Thank you for penning...:)