A new day

A new day

A Poem by Latifa
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new day new opportunities

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AAs the sun drunk the dew 
                                                                           As the birds woke and flew
As the morning breeze so softly blew
                                                                        The motherland had welcomed you
 The sky adorned herself too
 The fable day has arrived in holy faith so gracefully new 

© 2014 Latifa


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Very nicely done. 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Just beautiful. The flow of this is lovely and your thoughts are strong with such a blessed message.
Excellent!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Latifa

11 Years Ago

thank you for lovely review
Wow Latifa. So much said in so few lines. Excellent :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Latifa

11 Years Ago

thank you my friend for taking time and reading it
Stunning! My tea went cold reading...that is how much I enjoyed this lol xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


Latifa

11 Years Ago

thank you dear for your lovely review
Nice write, use the simple past tense drank rather than the particple drunk. Good job !

Posted 11 Years Ago


Latifa

11 Years Ago

thank you for your positive review
Beautiful imagery. Short, but contains loads to chew on for later.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Latifa

11 Years Ago

thank you Keith for stoping by
you did a wonderful job what type is it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Latifa

11 Years Ago

thank you for the read
Short in length, but not it depth. Carefully designed, and refreshing to read

Posted 11 Years Ago


Latifa

11 Years Ago

thank your lovely words
Very elegantly you have laid the words. Great message.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Latifa

11 Years Ago

thank you hon
A lovely tribute to the new day...very welcome...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Latifa

11 Years Ago

thank you dear for your kind words

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Added on October 16, 2013
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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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