The despair labyrinth

The despair labyrinth

A Poem by Latifa
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sometimes reaching the rock bottom is dangerous and could lead us to reckless decisions

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Tumble upon my serene spirit
And cross to the wretched stroll
Held hostage in the confined towers of suspicions
Hemmed in the circles of loathing 
Sanity drifted from my being 
And the sullen savagery settled in my hours
With no cane of help I am crippled
Equipped with tools of ruin
And sealed with doom

© 2013 Latifa


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And yet, through doom, we see cracks of light...not easy, but we do...I felt this and relate x

Posted 10 Years Ago


very well done wording here...hope 2 see more

Posted 10 Years Ago


What an absolute delight to read.

Congratulations Latifa,

All Good Things,

Neville

Posted 10 Years Ago


loathing, eh?
not enough saki
I think
HAI!!!
maybe some plumb wine too

Posted 10 Years Ago


Powerful imagery in this one, Latifa. I fear that hatred has taken control of your speaker's soul and will ruin her unless she learns to love. Very well written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very nice poet. I agree with your description....but to add to that, sometimes it takes hitting rock bottom to find our way back up!

Posted 10 Years Ago


My favorite poetry li e ever is apt here I think... 'We are the music makers, and we are the dreamers of dreams'

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sanity drifted from my being
And the sullen savagery settled in my hours
With no cane of help I am crippled

Some powerful stuff.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like your work, perhaps ( my idea ) it might be worth trying to reduce the adjectives and use a central, personal image to transport your ideas..

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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