Zeal

never let bordom conquer your life and search eternally for igniting power of zeal

Fasten the stagnant bodies

To the saddle of zeal

The flickering eyes yearn to feel

Sweeten the tasteless seconds

By the ballads of love

Do not fear to break 

Do not tame the urge

Sneak to the corners of life

And crave for more

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful. I had to read a few times. I like the flow of words. When we find something we need. We will become overcome with zeal. No weakness in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Baby Ricochet]

I WANT MORE! (muscle and sex) Good poem

[Ruth]

I felt the power within this...nicely done...gotta grasp it and go for it...gave me goosebumps, great piece x

[Latifa]

thank you hon

[Mike Emil]

fire
anger
passion
good good
a definite for kohlrabi theater
HAI!!!

[Leslie Philibert]

Good one, like the use of sneak, this verb brings in a kind of modern feeling that tensions well with the first lines...

[Frieda P]

Carpe the hell out of this diem...good message written with great intensity.

[MsJewel]

You have shared a wonderful message in this well written poem. Very nice!

:) Julie

[Tam Warink]

I fear this has broad implications. What of the zeal for thoughtful restraint?

100 cornered cravings

[wordman]

do not cross goal do not collect 200.00 dollars just go to the corner and hang on