Reminiscence

Reminiscence

A Poem by Latifa
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yearning for the last passed life... things change so fast.

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Yore, sweet tasteful yore
Has come knocking on my door
Alas.. I didn't open

© 2014 Latifa


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Like this too, but not too sure if a rhyme scheme belongs in a senryu..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

yeah it's not actually cause it's not meant to be one
thanks for the review
Good Senryu........................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice use of words. You said a lot in so few words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you for the review
but why not,great job short and sweet

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lovely write. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Isa wakin, hat in hand, feel'n so low-down, "Dat dor won open fo no man."

Posted 10 Years Ago


An interesting poem. I really liked it! The second line should be 'Has come knocking on my door' though I think... at least I think you are talking about yore still in this line yes?

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is interesting...Like it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


"Yore, sweet tasteful yore

Have came( has come) knocking in(at) my door

Alas.. I didn't open"

I take it as your old beloved friend came knocking but for some reason you did not want to let him in...A splendid poem...:).........







Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 24, 2014
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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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