Hedonistic flowers

Hedonistic flowers

A Poem by Latifa
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after such a long time, I hope you like it guys.

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Hedonistic flowers wrap its intoxicating odor
 It twirls, it coils
 It loops around your aorta
 To stroke, to paralyze your logic

 Aloof, detached your eyes stand blurred
 And your brain is intoxicated
 With the hedonistic odor

 WAKEY,WAKEY
     Drunken heart
I see you have addicted to the sweetness of the flowers
 The malicious sour thorns poked
 The drunken heart to awaken it
  Malicious you said..
  Why did it wake me then?
 As simple and as powerful 
 The thorns got envious of the hedonistic flowers
 And decides to poke the drunken heart

© 2015 Latifa


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"Hedonistic flowers wrap its intoxicating odor
It twirls, it coils
It loops around your aorta
To stroke, to paralyze your logic

Aloof, detached your eyes stand blurred
And your brain is intoxicated
With the hedonistic odor"

Love this lines. The world has its ways to intoxicate us with the many things dwelling inside it and we are the unfortunate victims. Well-penned!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for the review..:).............
Mirra

6 Years Ago

welcome :-)
this is masterful in its imagery...oh those damn thorns of reality show us that we can't just live a life of pleasure..i really like how you use "addicted" as a verb here..."addicted to the sweetness"

nice.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you Jacob, looking Forward to review more of your poetry..:).........
The thorns got envious of the hedonistic flowers
And decides to wake the drunken heart

The duality of emotions continue to shift. Excellent write, Latifa.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you darling..:)....
I got a special taste of this flowery poem.
Thank you Latifa for sharing a great work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for review.
zainul

6 Years Ago

You are welcome
Very well done, nicely created and truly enjoyed the read...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you Amos for stopping by .
Very well written. Definitely enjoyed reading this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for the review Amduscia..:).....
Amduscia

6 Years Ago

Truly a pleasure. Look forward to reading more of Your works.
I come back to share with you the power of your words and imagery. You have awakened us by your inspiration. Thank you for sharing...:)......................

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

glad to hear that specially from you Sami my fellow talented poet.)...
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

My pleasure. Any time...Take care...:)............................
what impresses is the wakey wakey, a style shift that stands out in the romantic narrative..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for the review Leslie, it's nice to hear from you.
What wonderful metaphor! Powerful hon, lovely to read you again x

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you darling.

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Added on June 14, 2014
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